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Great and Loud

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Once more i fall,
to be forced
i disengaged
why must i lose in this
endless fight
and carry this sword
which can win no fight
call to a tie at best
but i am forced to fight
all that face me
it brings forth such pain
i know the victory
i see the goal
i can grab for it
but i am so far.
Where is...my victory
from all this i gain thus
but i still fight
for the banded hilt is mine

I want to save it all but all appose me.
closed mouth, ears and eyes.
i am but another assult on their land.
Freedom Must come to you...
i can't and will not stay to fight the darkness
that you will let loose,
un-chained
un-taimed

OPEN YOUR EYES AND SEE ME IN TRUTH!!!
BEHOLD WHAT YOU HIDE FROM BUT ONE....
YOURSELF.....rest
this is a very interesting poem, that i feel is closer to what i feel about some things....
but none the less i wrote this in one shot and it came out very nicely.
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xLeah7x's avatar
I like the words....but the lack of punctuation makes it hard not to jumble all of those thoughts together. >.<