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A Woman's Worry (Original Text)
When you tear away my flesh, I do bleed
When bearing a seed, I bear a child
When you trample on me, I do scream
I am human, why do you treat me like dirt?
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Cold Cough (Response)
You act as thought it is so simple,
As if my heart is dumb and absent.
If I do bleed, it matters for null.
If I do release, it has no worth.
If I do fall and am tossed about, cries are shamed.
I too am a human,
If you were treated as such then I am lower.
Such has been my life, and do you care?
When you tear away my flesh, I do bleed
When bearing a seed, I bear a child
When you trample on me, I do scream
I am human, why do you treat me like dirt?
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Cold Cough (Response)
You act as thought it is so simple,
As if my heart is dumb and absent.
If I do bleed, it matters for null.
If I do release, it has no worth.
If I do fall and am tossed about, cries are shamed.
I too am a human,
If you were treated as such then I am lower.
Such has been my life, and do you care?
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The original poem "A Woman's Worry"
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My response is called "Cold Cough"
I chose to take the side of a single man's internal ideas. Rather selfish but interesting still.
I base that on the manner in which he "coughs" out his retort in a harsh manner.
it was posted by
My response is called "Cold Cough"
I chose to take the side of a single man's internal ideas. Rather selfish but interesting still.
I base that on the manner in which he "coughs" out his retort in a harsh manner.
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I really like this response. It takes it to another individual's point of view and rebuttal. Very well said. I could hear the "cough" myself.